Fariz: That Diplomat is A Dream Job

Have you ever think that diplomat is a dream Job? Is your dream job is diplomat? Why is it a dream job, why is there so many people that wants to be a diplomat? Let’s  found (find) it out. Before I go to my argument I’m gonna (I’m going to) explain to you what is diplomat.

Now what is diplomat? Diplomat is a person who is chosen by a state to conduct diplomacy with one or other states. Dream job means a big tile, huge goal and a fantastic work.

According to www.internationalperspective.be a diplomat called Mr Pawels break up on his couple to do diplomats job, and mr. Pawels also said that being a diplomat is boring as well.

For me if I being a diplomat im gonna feel bored because we always negotiating with a country and another country and because we always go to another country im gonna feel bored because I always inside a plane.

Now the conclusion is that I believe this motion should fall because being a diplomat is boring for me and is not a dream job because you will hard to get a couple and see your family because diplomat job is to go to many country all the time.

Teacher’s note:

1. Use ‘going to’ instead of ‘gonna’

2. Conclusion is only repeating what you have explained in the previous paragraphs. So, you can put the argument ‘you will hard to get a couple and see your family because diplomat job is to go to many country all the time’ in the separated paragraph before the conclusion, then restate briefly in the conclussion.

3. You can explain more details how a diplomat perform their work that it is boring, making hard to get couple and family (provide evidence and example).