Can you believe how online
friendship nowdays (nowadays) tricking us? They only using us for criminal, victims
and others.
Before I move to my argument,
I would like to tell what is online friendship and what is fake relationship. Online
friendship is a friend will you meet in social media like in instagram, path, and others.
And fake relationship is
when people just pretend to like you because of something but they actually
not.
And now, I believe this
motion is right and should stand because like can you imagine your already
treat you online friend good and nice and your online friend treat you in
different way like using you, actually he/she want to be your friend is not
she\actually want to be friend with ,it actually he/she want to do criminal or
something that is not comfortable for you. And like I said, online friend can
be dangerous for you because maybe they actually want to kidnap you or maybe
they want to kill you, like who would do that? Yes of course criminals.
I have some cases about
fake online relationship and it happens in Indonesia. So, there is a girl who
meet a boy and they became girlfriend and boyfriend, and someday the boyfriend
tell to his girlfriend in social media that he was sick and tell her please to
come over and the girlfriend said “ yes of course “. Then after the girlfriend
came to her boyfriend house and shocked because the profile picture and his
real face is so much different then the girlfriend call the police and the
police fix everything.
So, it’s better to have
friend in real life because why? Because based on www.speeli.com, online friend is just looking
for victims, do criminal, mostly people like to lie in nowdays social media and
online friendship is easily disappear, what’s the meaning of the online
friendship is disappear? I mean is that your online talk with you mostly
everyday but you see today why she’s not texting me, you don’t know that your
online friend has found a new friend that is more interesting than you or
should I say online friend is easily hurt you because based on www.goinwritter.com “ a true friendship only
happens only when people honesty share their feelings lives with another “ .
And I aggre (agree) with this motion because online friendship doesn’t show a
true relationship with you.
Teacher’s note:
- Write the definition in one paragraph only
- Make your conclusion separately in the last
paragraph
- Don’t use ‘and’ in the beginning of a
sentence.
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