Sunday, April 22, 2018

Maura: That online friendship is a fake relationship


Can you believe how online friendship nowdays (nowadays) tricking us? They only using us for criminal, victims and others.

Before I move to my argument, I would like to tell what is online friendship and what is fake relationship. Online friendship is a friend will you meet in social media  like in instagram, path, and others.

And fake relationship is when people just pretend to like you because of something but they actually not.

And now, I believe this motion is right and should stand because like can you imagine your already treat you online friend good and nice and your online friend treat you in different way like using you, actually he/she want to be your friend is not she\actually want to be friend with ,it actually he/she want to do criminal or something that is not comfortable for you. And like I said, online friend can be dangerous for you because maybe they actually want to kidnap you or maybe they want to kill you, like who would do that? Yes of course criminals.

I have some cases about fake online relationship and it happens in Indonesia. So, there is a girl who meet a boy and they became girlfriend and boyfriend, and someday the boyfriend tell to his girlfriend in social media that he was sick and tell her please to come over and the girlfriend said “ yes of course “. Then after the girlfriend came to her boyfriend house and shocked because the profile picture and his real face is so much different then the girlfriend call the police and the police fix everything.

So, it’s better to have friend in real life because why? Because based on www.speeli.com, online friend is just looking for victims, do criminal, mostly people like to lie in nowdays social media and online friendship is easily disappear, what’s the meaning of the online friendship is disappear? I mean is that your online talk with you mostly everyday but you see today why she’s not texting me, you don’t know that your online friend has found a new friend that is more interesting than you or should I say online friend is easily hurt you because based on www.goinwritter.com “ a true friendship only happens only when people honesty share their feelings lives with another “ . And I aggre (agree) with this motion because online friendship doesn’t show a true relationship with you.

Teacher’s note:
- Write the definition in one paragraph only 
Make your conclusion separately in the last paragraph
- Don’t use ‘and’ in the beginning of a sentence.

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