Sunday, April 22, 2018

Fira: That No Money No Friendship


How can we make friendship?  Do we need some money to make friendship?  Does friendship cost some money? Is it hard or easy to make a friendship? If it does not need money, can it last for long?

(www.wikipedia.org) Money is any item or verifiable record that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and repayment of debts in a particular country or socio-economic context. (www.wikipedia.org) Friendship is a relationship of mutual affection between people. And I agree with this motion.

My first argument is peoples (people) now days are changing. There are so many problems and criminals that humans made. Personality of people become more bad (worse). People do something bad for money. They do criminals to get money. They give false hope to other person. The example is, there's a girl that is really rich but she have no friend. Then there's one of the student that is the same class as her that want to be friends with her just because of her richness. She is so kind to her that they become best friends. The rich girl gives many things to this girl because she want to be friends with her. But one day, the girl who becomes the best friend of the rich girl left her because she just her richness. After she gets what she wants she left her. So the rich girl is only be used by her friend. If rich people also have no friends because the just be used, how about the people who have no money?  Of course they don't want to be friends with you because you don't have something special.

The second argument is, maybe they want to be friends with you purely,  but it's hard to find someone who really wants to be friends with you without wanting anything. Brains of peoples (people) nowadays have changed. I believe if your friends were asked wither to choose a rich friend or a normal friend they'll choose the rich friend.

We need money to make friendship because they'll choose someone who is rich to be friends with. Why?  They can use money for treating their friends. And in people eyes rich people is worth it to be friends with rather that normal people. I believe this motion should stand.

Teacher’s note:
Make the second paragraph smoother and better, write something before (www.wikipedia). And by the way, don’t take source from Wikipedia.

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