How can we make friendship? Do we need some money to make
friendship? Does friendship cost some
money? Is it hard or easy to make a friendship? If it does not need money, can
it last for long?
(www.wikipedia.org) Money is any
item or verifiable record that is generally accepted as payment for goods and
services and repayment of debts in a particular country or socio-economic
context. (www.wikipedia.org) Friendship is a relationship of mutual affection
between people. And I agree with this motion.
My first argument is peoples
(people) now days are changing. There are so many problems and criminals that
humans made. Personality of people become more bad (worse). People do something
bad for money. They do criminals to get money. They give false hope to other
person. The example is, there's a girl that is really rich but she have no
friend. Then there's one of the student that is the same class as her that want
to be friends with her just because of her richness. She is so kind to her that
they become best friends. The rich girl gives many things to this girl because
she want to be friends with her. But one day, the girl who becomes the best
friend of the rich girl left her because she just her richness. After she gets
what she wants she left her. So the rich girl is only be used by her friend. If
rich people also have no friends because the just be used, how about the people
who have no money? Of course they don't
want to be friends with you because you don't have something special.
The second argument is, maybe
they want to be friends with you purely,
but it's hard to find someone who really wants to be friends with you
without wanting anything. Brains of peoples (people) nowadays have changed. I
believe if your friends were asked wither to choose a rich friend or a normal
friend they'll choose the rich friend.
We need money to make friendship
because they'll choose someone who is rich to be friends with. Why? They can use money for treating their
friends. And in people eyes rich people is worth it to be friends with rather
that normal people. I believe this motion should stand.
Teacher’s note:
Make the second paragraph
smoother and better, write something before (www.wikipedia).
And by the way, don’t take source from Wikipedia.
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