Denin: That Black Market is Necesary

Black market is necessary because it can help poor/broke people. They can save money because the item is cheaper and has no taxes plus it may just decrease the number of beggar 1 by 1 on the streets and might just make the street less gross and cleaner.

And now moving on to my 1^st argument and I have a question for all of you, and the question is have you ever been to a black market unintentionally/intentionally like you know that there is a 2 shops one has more cheaper item because it has no taxes and the other one is more expensive because it has taxes and you were like want to buy an item but you don’t have enough money to buy the one with taxes so you buy the one without taxes, have you ever done in your life time if you have well that’s why black market are necessary.

Okay so moving on to my next 2^nd argument here’s another thing that makes black markets necessary, it can saves someone’s life, imagine this you need to go to the army to pay something expensive for your family or your debt or something and after working for a long time you got shot and then you got medical healing and it cost a body part and that body part can only be obtain trough black markets and that’s how black market are necessary for the world.

In conclusion, I think this motion should stand because it has a lot of good benefit for a lot of people in the world.

Teacher’s note:

- Provide definitions of the keywords here (the second paragraph)

- State whether you agree or disagree with the motion, and why, then you can continue to your argument here (second or third paragraph).
- Make your sentences shorter, put ‘full stop’ where necessary so the reader can read and understand your writing more easily.

For example, your paragraph:

“And now moving on to my 1^st argument and I have a question for all of you, and the question is have you ever been to a black market unintentionally/intentionally like you know that there is a 2 shops one has more cheaper item because it has no taxes and the other one is more expensive because it has taxes and you were like want to buy an item but you don’t have enough money to buy the one with taxes so you buy the one without taxes, have you ever done in your life time if you have well that’s why black market are necessary.”

You can rewrite it as:

Moving on to my 1^st argument. I have a question for all of you, have you ever been to a black market unintentionally/intentionally? like you know that there is a 2 shops one has more cheaper item because it has no taxes and the other one is more expensive because it has taxes. You were like want to buy an item but you don’t have enough money to buy the one with taxes so you buy the one without taxes. Have you ever done in your life time? if you have well that’s why black market are necessary.