Definition
Black
market: the trade of goods illegally
Consumers: the one who pays something to consume goods
and services produced
Teacher's note: Write the definition in the form of paragraph, not separated sentence.
My first argument is, black market is illegal, so if
they keep on doing this it would be more illegal. why are black market illegal?
base on www.investopedia.com that black market controlled products such as drug, drug
are illegally traded. For example, based on listverse.com in the UK, Dead
animals are left in cages to rot alongside live ones, and puppies are sold
without vaccinations or microchips those are not good for the animals to not
have vaccinations before sold or adopted.
My 2nd
argument is based on www.thoughtco.com When
the government makes the product illegal, a black market is subsequently
created. When a government makes a product illegal. First, there is a sharp
drop in supply as the penalties for selling the good cause people to shift into
other industries. Second, a drop in demand is observed as a prohibition of
possessing the good deters some consumers from wanting to buy it. These are the
bad effects of black market and consumers should be punished. Based on mic.com
the biggest black market. The U.S. comes in first has the largest black market
in the world, amounting to $625.5 billion, China comes in second, with a black
market size of $261 billion, and at the 3rd, Mexico with a value of $126
billion.
In conclusion black market controlled products such as drug, drug are illegally
traded so I agree that consumers should be punished for participating in black
market.
Teacher's note:
- Definition, argument and conclusion must be inserted in the paragraph. See how I edit your argument and conclusion. Do the same for your definition.
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